Adam turned the corner, then
ducked back out of sight. A graffiti writer was spray-painting his message on
the border wall.
Feed
Our Children
He was painting children
underneath the words, and Adam was mesmerized by the economy of motion he used,
the simple lines to create such clear faces. Big eyes, hollow cheeks, a study
in desperation. Adam should stop him, arrest him. He put his hand on his baton,
but did not pull it free of the holster. He was imagining his own child’s face
on that wall.
A cry from the far tunnel sent
the vandal racing toward Adam. He struggled with his need to perform his duty,
step forward, catch the young man, or step back and let him pass. Still frozen
in his internal crisis, he didn’t move from the fleeing man’s path, and they
collided in the tunnel, just out of the other guard’s sight. Adam could hear
him running across the open border space, shoes echoing heavily on the metal
flooring.
Adam grabbed the vandal’s arm,
swung him back against the wall. He was a kid himself, still wearing a teen’s
wristband. Some parent was waiting for their own child to come home safe this
night. Adam shook him. “Are you crazy? You know the penalty for insurrection?”
The teen hit his head against the wall.
“Go ahead,” he hissed. “Arrest me.” Bravado.
Adam could see the fear in the
wide white of his eyes, smell it in his acrid sweat. He dropped the boy’s arm
and stepped back. “Go to Mellie’s in the morning. You know it?”
Everyone knew his sister’s kitchen.
The boy nodded.
“Ones or twos. Back door. She’ll
have food. Go now. Fast!”
The boy’s eyes widened even
further, but he didn’t hesitate to sprint away down the tunnel. Adam pulled out
his baton and shouted “Stop! Patrol! Stop!” He listened for the running steps
behind him and started running after the boy as soon as the other guard turned
the corner into the tunnel. Adam bent over as if winded. “Damn, he was fast!
Where’d he come from” he questioned the guard, who stopped near him, glaring
into the dark, empty tunnel.
“Damn vandal. I’ll report it. Did
you get a look at him?”
“Naw, he barreled into me before
I knew what hit me. You okay?”
The other guard spat on the metal
floor. “Yeah,” he said with disgust. He flipped open his tel-link. “Patrol
report. Vandal scene at Border 5. Cleanup. No arrest.”
Adam stood straight and nodded to
the guard, one he knew only by face, not even by name. There were more guards
than workers, these days. They still couldn’t control the insurrection. They
knocked batons together, then headed in opposite directions. The guard
continued down the tunnel, though he knew as well as Adam the boy was long
gone.
Adam walked out into the border
space and tried not to look at the graffiti while he crossed to the opposite
tunnel. He thought he should probably send Mellie a message to start cooking a
little extra in the morning…
Dogs in house
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Houdini
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Time writing
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~30 minutes, interrupted
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February word
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6,404
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Writing report:
ReplyDeleteNovel editing, Ch24, spot edits Ch21, Ch25
Time: ~30 min
Great characterisation, and of a very complex character! Good word building, too. You are very skilled at showing little pieces that build up to a larger picture -- that's one of my weak points, so I hope I can learn from your examples, here.
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