Olivia sat on
the first row of the movie theater with her eyes closed, and hands over her
ears. She caught the voice through the screen music and the people talking as
they settled into their seats. Before she could pinpoint it any further, Marian
jostled her elbow, falling into the seat next to her. “Honestly, Liv, you look
like such a freak when you do that!”
She said it with
a laugh, but it still stung. Olivia shrugged and pulled her hands to her lap.
She’d try again once the lights went down. Hopefully Marian would be too distracted
by the previews to notice.
Movies were
great places, because the crowd was fairly small, focused on one thing, and
sitting still for a long time. Olivia liked to sit in the dark and listen for
the voice over all the noise, the one she heard with her ears covered. Once she
heard it, she could look around the room and concentrate on who the voice
belonged to. Over the years, she’d become an expert, and it was her own private
challenge to find the person crying out, even if they didn’t realize it.
Since the
shooting in Aurora, she’d had the idea that maybe she could really do some
good. Maybe, just maybe, she could help someone, or even save someone. The
freak turned superhero. Even if no one ever knew. So she started going to the
movies as often as she could afford, with friends or alone. She was torn as to
which was better. She preferred to go alone to listen, but she liked having
company for the movie itself.
Sometimes she
had the opportunity to strike up a conversation, make a connection. Usually it
was no more than a brief moment, but sometimes she could maneuver a phone
number or IM handle to continue chatting.
I don’t think I can take it any more…
Olivia felt the
despair behind the voice and wanted to jump up and shout, “You’re not alone!
Things will get better, I promise!” But she had to play it cool, seek out the
person and find a way to connect with them before the end of the movie. Her own
private game, with the highest stakes she could imagine.
The lights
dimmed and the previews began. Marian passed the popcorn, and Olivia pushed it
gently back. Marian shrugged and glued her eyes to the screen. Olivia slid her
hands over her ears and listened…
Dogs
in house
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Houdini
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Music
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ZZ Ward, Till the Casket Drops
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Time
writing
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20 minutes
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February
word count
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989
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Writing report:
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Time: ~40 mins
Oh, nifty! This one really brings the reader into the piece well -- I didn't know exactly what was going on at the start, but by the end I was highly invested and her listening pose seems absolutely natural.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Anne!
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