Thanks to one of my favorite artists, Artur Rosa, for permission to use his lovely, "Archipelago 27"!
Makim stood motionless in the
shelter of the trees and watched the figure walking along the shore. If she
hadn’t recognized her mother’s form the moment she appeared, Makim would have
fired a warning shot by now.
As it was, she kept a vigilant
watch in case any others from the Archipelago appeared. There was no one else
she would hesitate to shoot, including her mother’s mate. Makim refused to call
him father.
Makim was on sentry, for the
Exiles never knew when the Archipelago might send troops to sweep the forest. A
guard stood watch on each port entry along the twenty-mile shoreline, and a
sentry leader held central position to relay alarms from any one. Makim’s shift
was two days gone, three to go. Mostly it was boring and tedious, watching flocks
of fist-sized black-winged pleekots fly across the cloudless sky.
Her camoshield jumpsuit rippled
colors tight across her skin, reflecting the forest behind her, the ocean
before her, and the silver sheen of the two moons above. She gripped her
forearms, taking comfort in the slender blades resting under the camo fabric.
Her long dark hair swung loose, hiding her face as the chill north shore breeze
swept past.
Makim looked out at the luxurious
mansions that framed the closest island fortresses of the Archipelago. Some looked
like mirrored rings around the steep, impregnable slopes of the tiny islands
that thrust like bullets out of the ocean. Some rested on top, perfectly
balanced no matter the fierce winds that swept across the water. Makim grew up
looking inland, dreaming of the ultimate luxury -- freedom.
Looking down, she saw her mother
had crossed the sand and was struggling to climb the rocky dunes. Narrowing her
eyes, she turned again and studied the shoreline and forest, searching for any
other guards who might sound the alarm. They would shoot first and ask
questions later. But Makim had a question that burned in her chest day and
night. She left the trees’ shelter and headed toward the steep dune. Finally
she would have the chance to ask her mother.
Why?
Dogs in house
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Houdini, Brindle
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Time writing
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25 minutes, interrupted
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January word
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AHHH....Why what?
ReplyDeleteYou snagged me pretty early on with this one :)
Thanks, Ken! :) I might return to this one - I liked it too.
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