Michael walked down the dusty
road, shifting his pack from left shoulder to right whenever it started to feel
uncomfortable. Which was more and more often the farther he went. He’d thought
there would be plenty of traffic, someone to pick him up for at least part of
his journey. But he hadn’t seen a car in at least 45 minutes, and he wanted
nothing more than to lay his pack down, rest his head on it and close his eyes.
Certain death. He had to keep moving.
Away from something, or closer to
something else? It no longer mattered. Moving was what kept him alive. His
memory was fading around the edges, closing in until this road was all that
remained. What if no cars came? The sun blazed in the blue, cloudless sky, and
he began to think he might be the last person living. He shifted the pack again
and wiped his brow. That couldn’t be right, could it? He furrowed his brows in
thought as he walked on. Could it?
Dust rose on the horizon. A car,
heading in the other direction. He couldn’t go back. Panic tightened his chest.
He couldn’t be seen. He’d been counting his steps, praying to a god he had no
faith in for a car to appear, and now he was sure it only meant disaster. He scrambled
off the road, looking for any shelter, any place to hide. The dust trail wound
closer.
There, a washed out gully. He
jumped down and crouched low, hoping no one had seen him. They’d drive on,
leaving him safe. Alone. He cocked his head, listening. The car engine roared
closer, closer. Slowed, and slowed. Idling along the road. Looking for him? He
closed his eyes. Please don’t stop. Please don’t get out. Please don’t make me—
The engine roared again and sped
away. Michael blew out a breath and dropped his head in relief. Relief to be
left alone again on this deserted stretch of road. Suddenly he jumped to his
feet. Wait! Come back! He raced to the edge of the road, but the car was
already lost from sight.
Michael shook his head in
resignation and shuffled the backpack to his other shoulder. He looked after
the car one more time, then turned and continued in the direction he’s been
heading. He couldn’t go back, anyway.
Dogs in house
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Charley, Oliver, Pippin (at writers retreat)
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Radio Paradise
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Time writing:
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20 minutes
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I'm trying to convey *Michael's* sense of confusion. Is it just confusing for the reader? Maybe not enough story yet to tell...
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