Genra sat patiently while the
brush stroked through her hair, deft hands braided and pinned, soft voice
hummed a nameless tune, although it seemed familiar somehow.
“There you are, Missa Genra.”
“Thank you, Prime.” She tilted her
head and smiled into the mirror. “Bernard will appreciate your efforts.”
Prime ducked her head and glanced
away. Genra suspected she had a crush on Bernard. At least she was confident he
had no interest in the clones.
“Mama! Mama! Let’s see you all
dressed up!” Robby and Julia raced into the bedroom, leaping onto the bed with
exuberant energy. Prime stepped aside, hands behind her back, until Genra was
ready for her to take them out.
Genra stood and spun, admiring the
swirl of her chiffon skirt and the sparkle along her draped sleeves. Julia
clapped, and Robby blew kisses. Genra curtsied to them, then nodded to Prime.
Stepping forward, Prime waved the
children toward her. “Come now. Let’s let your Mama finish getting ready in
peace. Secca has dinner ready for us. I think I smelled peaches—”
Robby cried, “Peach cobbler! Let’s
go!” He rolled off the bed and ran out the door. Prime waited for Julia, who
climbed down the bed and walked over to stand next to Genra as she leaned
toward the mirror, putting on a row of silver-chain-linked earrings. She smiled
down at her daughter. “Have an extra bite of cobbler for me, okay, honey?”
Julia hugged her around the waist, then ran past Prime.
As Prime turned to follow the
children, Genra said, “Prime? Don’t let Secca give them too much. You know
Robby will have a stomachache.”
Prime ducked her head again,
nodding, and left silently. Genra leaned her hands on the dressing table and stared at
the reflection if the empty doorway, wondering about the anger she’d sensed
from her first clone.
To be continued?
Dogs in house:
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Houdini, Brindle
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Music
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Mumford & Sons - I Will Wait”
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Time writing
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~15 minutes
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July word
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4,048
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Writing report:
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Ah, it took me a while to follow, but I get it now. Fascinating idea! MIght need a little more context in a rewrite, as at the first mention of clones I assumed that was something else than the characters we saw there. Perhaps because it was plural and we had only met one clone so far? A simple a change as to "the clone" might have fixed my initial misdirection.
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