tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3022413452547277809.post8709772509471645282..comments2023-07-06T07:33:06.262-04:00Comments on * Writers' Spark * Every story has to start somewhere *: Prompt: Freedom Always Comes with a PriceUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3022413452547277809.post-71100792343648368742014-07-09T18:34:59.445-04:002014-07-09T18:34:59.445-04:00Ah, it took me a while to follow, but I get it now...Ah, it took me a while to follow, but I get it now. Fascinating idea! MIght need a little more context in a rewrite, as at the first mention of clones I assumed that was something else than the characters we saw there. Perhaps because it was plural and we had only met one clone so far? A simple a change as to "the clone" might have fixed my initial misdirection.Annenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3022413452547277809.post-51667517871361576732014-07-09T18:31:05.763-04:002014-07-09T18:31:05.763-04:00Writing report:
Novel editing, spot edits Ch13b (t...Writing report:<br />Novel editing, spot edits Ch13b (the new one), continue Ch27 POV change, preview Ch28<br /><br />time: ~30minAnnenoreply@blogger.com