“Please, don’t call the medics.
I’ll be all right in a moment. Please…”
“Okay, but let me help you up.
You’ve got to cool down. If you don’t want an ice bath, then let me get you in
the freezer for a few minutes and see how you feel. But I’m reserving the right
to call the medics if you pass out.” He tried to inject both sternness and
humour into his voice. Maybe it worked, because she pushed herself up a little
and accepted his help sitting up.
He handed her the walking staff,
and she leaned heavily on it as well as his hand gripping hers. She slid slowly
down the stool to stand, with a heavier thump than he expected. Standing so
close, he heard gears whir as she took a step. With a shock, he realized she
must have leg braces under the voluminous robes she wore. He’d always assumed
the brightly colored and intricately patterned dress was simply her ethnic
expression. Now he realized she had used it well to disguise the extent of her
disability.
“Come on, it’s not far to the
freezer,” he encouraged her.
The station did its best to
accommodate the different needs of researchers who came for varying lengths of
time. Kaazaahns had a core body temp of 9 degrees Celcius. They had a
whole-room freezer set at -2 degrees, complete with plush sofas and a wet bar.
Electronics weren’t allowed in, but there were ice dart boards and other games
stationed around the room.
Garduth had dated a Kaazaahn hetfem
in grad school, and he could stay in the freezer longer than most humans. He’d
give Sheria fifteen minutes, and then he was calling the medics, no matter what
her objection, if her temp didn’t make a big dive.
Settling her on the freezer sofa,
he rolled over a solid ball to sit next to her, still holding her hand.
She coughed, a shallow cough up in her chest, and he could see from the way she winced that it hurt. She looked away from him and muttered again, “I’m sorry.”
“You don’t have anything to be
sorry about. You’re sick. Do you know what this is?”
She nodded. He waited.
“My parents were missionaries.
When my mother became pregnant with me, they decided to settle on Zeta Four.”
Garduth nodded. He’d visited there
a couple of times. It was a lovely planet, mostly tropical, and the cultures
were maintained at sub-tech levels. He’d laughed at how much some people
complained about peeling off and storing all their tech for the duration of
their stay. But what did Zeta Four have to do with—
“On their way, they stopped at
Binahl Three.”
Dogs in House
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Houdini
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Music
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Earl Klugh, Hand
Picked
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Time writing
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~80 minutes
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May word
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11,094
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Writing report:
ReplyDeleteNovel editing, redoing Ch13a. New POV definitely correct decision; discovering logical faults in character's actions when trying to view it from her POV. Have hope that this will solve the problems up in Ch27-19.
Time: ~10min