Thanks to Barbara “MysticMorning”for permission to use her elegant image, "Castle Ruins”!
Serena, wake up! Come on!
The distant call of her sister’s
laughing voice startled her from sleep, as it did every morning. Serena tugged
the worn sheet enough to loosen its tangles so she could roll over and look out
the window. Some days she never got out of bed.
As long as she stayed right here,
she could imagine Karya was running up the turret stairs to drag her down to
breakfast with their parents. They were sipping tea and reading their morning
reports in the dining hall, while Beska and Hardo hovered around, bringing
dishes out from the kitchen, filling cups and glasses after every sip, and
murmuring support over every muttered exclamation.
Lost in memory, Serena almost
missed the noisy spout of a rising doloroth whale. The second spout was enough
to drag her from her tangled bed, and she ran to the window, looking down the
slender turret spire to the crystal blue water below. Two doloroths rested side
by side in the shade of the observatory ruins. A male and female, judging by
their size. Perhaps they carried news in their song. Serena ran down the
winding stairs to greet them.
When she reached the mid-plaza,
she tried to run past the balcony. She did. But although she resolutely did not
look, a flash of yellow startled her, and she heard Karya’s scream as she
fell all the way into the water far below, after the sickening thud as she hit the wall again and again, maybe trying to grab hold of something. Serena staggered and grabbed the balcony for support. She leaned over the
open wall, retching despite her empty stomach. Looking down, she saw no yellow,
of course. Only the sparkling blue of the sunlit sea. And the doloroths.
Why didn't you push out and dive into the water?
She lingered against the balcony.
What use to continue down? No part of their song would be for her. She rested
her forehead against the stone. She had no more tears left to cry. Her parents
were long gone, after Karya’s fall, Beska and Hardi fussing around them.
Serena’s grief and guilt imprisoned her in the castle, long decayed into ruin…
Dogs in House
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Brindle, Houdini
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Music
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Beatles mix
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Time writing
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~30 minutes
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April word
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1,276
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Writing report:
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Love the story! Sad, but how many of us has lost someone we truly love, most everyone. And this story is something we can understand her feelings.
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