Thanks to
Karolina for permission to use her beautiful image “Chinese Plant Dragon”!
Quilong’s curled
horns twitched in the dark earth, reaching toward sunlight. His scales grew
long and spiny along his slender neck and ridged back, pushing through the
heavy dirt in search of water. Light. Life.
He dreamed. Men
cut down the trees of his homeland, using the wood to build boxes to live in.
They set fire to the wood as if they were gods! Or dragons. Quilong rumbled in
his deep sleep, and the flame burned in his belly. He woke with the great
desire to yawn wide and belch a swath of flame around him. He could not move in
the frozen ground. It was not yet time. Still the flame burned, hotter and
hotter until he thought it would roast himself from the inside.
The season
turned. The sun warmed. The ice melted. Cold water seeped into the dark, frozen
soil, around Quilong’s horns, his snout, his neck, his spiny scales. He pushed
with his tail and felt the dirt loosen. It was time. The flame still burned.
Would he burn the delicate roots before they were strong enough to thrive on
their own? In his desire to be free, he almost didn’t care.
Now he dreamed
with purpose. Seeds sprouting, first growth reaching up, unfurling, drinking in
the earth’s bounty. He felt the thin roots stretching down from above, wrapping
around his horns, tickling his ears, poking his eyes. Larger they grew, some
grass, some rice, some trees. The thick tree roots pushed aside his spiny scales,
pressing against his skin. He could move his whole tail now, and shiver all the
way up his back to his ears. Soon. Soon.
The spring rains
fell. The river flooded, pouring fresh water all over the land. It sank down
into the soil, loosening, nourishing. Quilong could feel the plants growing all
around him. It was time. He rose, every muscle straining to push his great body
through the thick mud from the river’s flood.
His horns broke
through, into the warm spring air, then his curled ears, listening to the songs
of life repeating once again. And again. And again.
Quilong rose from
the earth with a mighty roar. The hot flames burst from his snout in a fiery
torch that lit the night sky. He shook himself free of the dirt, mud, roots
that clung to his scales, stretching his wings wide and flapping them back and
forth to build their strength. His tail lashed against the earth, scattering the
signs of his upheaval, his hiding place.
The delicate
grass trembled beneath his steps. The trees stretched their limbs toward him as
he passed. Quilong stalked with angry purpose toward to homes of man. He
reached the edge of the valley and climbed the mountain, half walking, half
flying. At the top, he coiled around the peak and glared at the sight before
him.
He had slept so
long. Too long. The homes of man stretched across as far as he could see. He
could not destroy them all. They belched black smoke into the skies. He could
not defeat them all.
Quilong lay his
head against the top of the mountain and the fire in his belly dimmed to
nothing. He had failed. He could do nothing to protect his world from man.
He felt something
tickle his chin. Quilong raised his head and looked down at the mountain peak.
A single blade of grass quivered beneath him. Quilong watched it grow strong
and true in the blazing sun. He felt a spark in his belly. With one last, long
look at the world of man, Quilong turned and headed back down the mountain.
Time
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October
word count:
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12,277
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Prompt: Chinese plant dragon
ReplyDeleteJing parted the soil a few centimetres away from the stalk. She titled the battered plastic watering can she had retrieved from Mum’s shed and directed a stream of water into the crack. She stood at soft footsteps behind her.
“What are you doing?” asked Fai. He leaned past her, looking at the small grey-green plant.
“Watering my dragon.” She glared at her twin, daring him to contradict her.
He tilted his head. “It doesn’t look healthy.”
“_He_ is fine.” She had planted the dragon seed only three days ago, and already he was centimetres high. He would be a full size dragon in no time.
Time writing: 20 minutes
Oh I really like this! Nice free-standing snippet, especially with the image! It could be a fun little piece...
DeleteSo sad, and yet hopeful at the end. A little confused about exactly what was happening, but really enjoyed the imagery.
ReplyDeleteThanks - glad you liked the imagery. I'm not sure I entirely knew what was happening, so *shrug* - I can handle more image than plot on a first draft *grin*
DeleteOne of the things I wrestle with the image prompts is how much to include description of them, vs how much they simply inform the story. And I often think I don't include *enough* description in general, so this is a way to push myself to do more of that. Now, for some balance...