Once he had surprised a fox in the woods. When he told his
father at supper that night, he just nodded. After supper, he picked up his
rifle and headed out into the dark. Evan’s mother made him go to bed before his
father returned. He dreamed of the little red fox and its bushy tail and twitching
whiskers. He cried at breakfast the next morning when his father offered him
the tail for a hunting cap. He pushed his bowl away and almost tipped over his
chair getting out and running up to his room.
He never told his father about anything he saw after that.
Every morning, he carried three pebbles down to the lake. He
stopped in the trees to survey the shore, then look across the water to the
shimmering curtain that rose up in the middle of the lake into the sky
overhead, as far as he could see. He never aimed for the curtain with the first
stone. With a sure flick of his wrist, he skipped the first stone across the
lake. Sometimes his first throw would be perfect, and the stone would skip
four, five, even six times before dropping into the water.
Evan covered his eyes and peered up towards the clouds,
always hoping he might see the edge of the curtain far above. Or see something—anything—up
there. No birds had flown into their woods since the day the curtain appeared.
His father had hunted just about every living creature to put meat on their
table. That fox had been one of the last.
Evan took the second stone and threw it in a high arc across
the lake. No matter how hard, how high he threw, the stone never reached the
curtain either. It always fell short with a soft plop in the lake’s gentle
waves.
He tossed the third stone up in the air and caught it, over
and over. After awhile, he would wind up like the baseball pitchers he remembered
seeing on television, and once when he was little, his father took him to see a
minor leagues game at the nearest town. He would fake throwing pitches and
imagine the announcer describing each one—fast balls, curves, slow balls—until,
with an extra wind of his arm, he would throw the third stone with all his
might, straight across the water toward the curtain. Every time, it would pass
right through the curtain, like going through a smooth sheet of water falling
down a waterfall, and disappear.
And every day, that was that. Evan had swum out to the
curtain, btu he couldn’t go through it. He had sailed his little Sunfish
sailboat out there and bumped up against it, but couldn’t get through. But
somehow, that little stone went through every day.
Today, he watched it go through, and then when he started to
turn around and head home, he heard an odd sound across the water. A little
pop. He whipped his head around and scanned the lake. Coming back across the
water towards him was a small white stone. Evan knew without a doubt that it
was the same stone he had thrown. It fell closer and closer to the water, and
he knew it wouldn’t reach the shore. He waded into the water, desperate to
catch it. He raced toward it, stretching out his hands, and caught it just
above the surface of the lake. His momentum carried him into a full dive under
the water, and he jumped up with excitement, his small prize locked in his fist.
Wading back to shore, shaking off water like a dog, Evan
opened his fingers to see the stone lying on his palm. It was the exact same
stone he had carried down from the yard, turning it over in his fingers with
the other two, memorizing its features in only a few minutes as his fingers
felt every crevice and curve.
He looked back to the curtain, hoping to see something more.
Something new. It was the same as always. But today, the stone came back.
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I'm very tired, so this is even rougher than usual. Not sure if there's more story here, but there might be. Any constructive suggestions for me to work on when I've had a few hours sleep? And coffee...
ReplyDeleteI thought that maybe he might find a way under the curtain when he dove down. What if there is another boy trying to do the same thing on the other side, like a mirror world. If they could connect or communicate they might solve their dilemma of the food.
ReplyDeleteGreat ideas, Chris! I like it. Especially the mirror - maybe it's not really the same stone, or maybe it is and they can start passing notes back and forth...Hmm...Thanks!
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