He opened his eyes and felt a
flicker of surprise. A white fox lay on the other side of the fire, curled
tight against the cold. Its tail covered its paws and nose, leaving only the
wide brown eyes, lined in black, watching him without blinking. Jasques stared
back for awhile, and the fox finally gave one slow blink and shifted its eyes away.
“Well, we’ll find no game for our
supper tonight, pup. Unless you have something?” He said with a teasing tone,
opening his pack to pull out some jerky and dried bread. He chewed off a piece
of jerky with his teeth and tossed it across the low-burning fire to land in
front of the fox. He tore off two small pieces of bread and tossed them to land
with precision on either side of the dried meat. The fox still did not move,
but watched him closely.
Jasques ate his traveller’s fare
and tortured himself with memories of meals past. He put two more logs on the
fire and lay down, tucking the pack under his head. “Good night, pup. If you’re
gone before I wake, safe journey,” he said quietly across the fire. He closed
his eyes and opened his brarre to sense any other approach, falling quickly
into a deep sleep. In his first dream, the fox sat off to one side. In his
second dream, the fox walked with him through the deep forest, where the snow
drifted down like glowing crystals. In the third dream, the fox spoke.
Jasques snapped his eyes open. “Are
you still there, pup?” He asked as he sat and looked across the fire. The fox
still lay curled as it had since he first saw it. Jasques sighed and prepared for
another brarre roaming. He had to confirm what the fox had told him in his dream.
The fox gave no sign it was awake.
TBC (perhaps)
Dogs in house:
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Houdini, Brindle
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Time writing:
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20 minutes
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May word
count:
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8,243
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Hmm, I didn’t quite get to the prompt, exactly. It’s out
there, I swear!
Is the brarre clear or too confusing?
Prompt: Everything flows, nothing stays
ReplyDeleteThe leaf swirled in a circle three times, then shot off down the stream like it had decided it had somewhere to go. I dropped another leaf. This one did not circle at all before heading down the stream. I dropped another leaf. It was still circling when the man spoke.
"What are you learning, son?"
I looked up. He was kneeling on the opposite side of the stream, wearing a short brown jacket over a faded blue shirt, with scuffed white leggings tucked into tall canvas boots. I dropped another leaf.
"Well?"
I looked up, and lost track of the leaf. It was gone. "Now I have to start over," I complained.
"I see," the man said. He shifted in his kneel and sat.
I dropped another leaf. What I had said was nonsensical, I knew, because there was truly no start. It was a better game that way.
Time writing: 15 minutes
Very Pooh-ish! :)
DeleteNice description of the leaves movement and the man.