tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3022413452547277809.post2445538316755745157..comments2023-07-06T07:33:06.262-04:00Comments on * Writers' Spark * Every story has to start somewhere *: Prompt: The Water Horse Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3022413452547277809.post-23830625743880514762014-02-18T00:29:10.075-05:002014-02-18T00:29:10.075-05:00Thanks, and darn it, you caught me! POV remains my...Thanks, and darn it, you caught me! POV remains my weakness. I always want to show everything. Perhaps something "She felt the tears on her cheeks like liquid moonlight.." would keep it consistent and accomplish the same image. Thanks, Anne!Margaret S. McGrawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18301618521427459626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3022413452547277809.post-83957322285378808282014-02-17T18:51:37.535-05:002014-02-17T18:51:37.535-05:00Lovely description of the horse! Last sentence le...Lovely description of the horse! Last sentence leaves Keera's POV, though (she couldn't see the moonlight on her own cheek) -- not sure if that is intentional.Annehttp://www.vannearden.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3022413452547277809.post-82264454305618504642014-02-17T18:48:27.168-05:002014-02-17T18:48:27.168-05:00Writing Report:
Novel editing, spot edits Ch21 and...Writing Report:<br />Novel editing, spot edits Ch21 and Ch22<br /><br />Time: 15 minAnnehttp://www.vannearden.comnoreply@blogger.com